Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Rough Thesis

As problems seem to occur more and more often in children, such as ADD and ADHD, more and more pills are being prescriped. With the hundreds of changes a child goes through as they grow and develop, these pills are actually disabling these children in the long run.


this is very rough, tell me what you think.
comments are greatly appreciated.

2 comments:

Eddie's Blog said...

i think its a very good thesis. It sets up your paper and what you are going to talk about really good.

tylerstudent29 said...

Not 2 bad broseph.Who am I to critique anyones paper lol